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====Chapters==== | ====Chapters==== | ||
===Chapter 4=== | ===Chapter 4=== | ||
- | * "You have to strip down your writing before you can build it back up" {sounds like OCS training} | + | * "You have to strip down your writing before you can build it back up" |
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* "Sell yourself, and your subject will exert its own appeal" | * "Sell yourself, and your subject will exert its own appeal" | ||
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* "the pen must at length comply with the tongue" | * "the pen must at length comply with the tongue" | ||
* "In general we turned out to be liberal in accepting new words and phrases, but conservative in grammar" | * "In general we turned out to be liberal in accepting new words and phrases, but conservative in grammar" | ||
- | * "These may seem like picayune distinctions. They' | + | * "These may seem like picayune distinctions. They' |
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+ | ===== On Writing Well ===== | ||
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+ | * 1976 | ||
+ | * William Zinsser | ||
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+ | ====Ch 13. Bits and Pieces==== | ||
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+ | * use active verbs | ||
+ | * Hemingway, Thurber, Thoreau, KJV, Shakespeare, | ||
+ | * "Joe hit him" vs "He was hit by Joe" | ||
+ | * Most adverbs are unecessary e.g. "The radio blared loudly" | ||
+ | * Most adjectives are unnecessary (fr elsewhere: quality over extent) | ||
+ | * Limit qualifiers e.g. "a bit", " | ||
+ | * Keep paragraphs short | ||
+ | * "Your subconscious mind does more writing than you think" | ||
+ | * Use verbs instead of concept nouns e.g. reaction, cynicism | ||
+ | * abolish "The human condition" | ||
+ | * avoid concept nouns | ||
+ | * "The common reaction is incredulous laughter" | ||
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+ | Science | ||
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+ | * Sequence is key - start with reader knows nothing --> " | ||
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+ | ==== CH 17 Humor==== | ||
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+ | * Humor - using it to deliver a serious point " | ||
+ | * "Humor is the secret weapon of the non-fiction writer. It is secret because so few writers realize that it is often their best tool -- and sometimes their only tool -- for making an important point" p.134 | ||
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+ | ==== History ==== | ||
+ | * 2017-04-26 Created | ||
+ | * 2020-08-28 Transcribed from index card to dokuwiki | ||
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