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 ====Chapters==== ====Chapters====
 ===Chapter 4=== ===Chapter 4===
-  * "You have to strip down your writing before you can build it back up" {sounds like OCS training} +  * "You have to strip down your writing before you can build it back up" carpentry metaphor {sounds like OCS training} 
-  * "writing is obviously at his most natural and relaxed when he writes in the first person"+  * "writer is obviously at his most natural and relaxed when he writes in the first person"
   * "Sell yourself, and your subject will exert its own appeal"   * "Sell yourself, and your subject will exert its own appeal"
   * "Writing is an act of ego, and you might as well admit it."   * "Writing is an act of ego, and you might as well admit it."
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   * "the pen must at length comply with the tongue" Samuel Johnson   * "the pen must at length comply with the tongue" Samuel Johnson
   * "In general we turned out to be liberal in accepting new words and phrases, but conservative in grammar" p.40   * "In general we turned out to be liberal in accepting new words and phrases, but conservative in grammar" p.40
-  * "These may seem like picayune distinctions. They're not. They are signals to the reader that you are senstivie to the many shadings of usage."+  * "These may seem like picayune distinctions. They're not. They are signals to the reader that you are sensitive to the many shadings of usage." 
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 +===== On Writing Well ===== 
 + 
 +  * 1976 
 +  * William Zinsser 
 + 
 +====Ch 13. Bits and Pieces==== 
 + 
 +  * use active verbs 
 +    * Hemingway, Thurber, Thoreau, KJV, Shakespeare, Lincoln 
 +    * "Joe hit him" vs "He was hit by Joe" 
 +  * Most adverbs are unecessary e.g. "The radio blared loudly" 
 +  * Most adjectives are unnecessary (fr elsewhere: quality over extent) 
 +  * Limit qualifiers e.g. "a bit", "very" 
 +  * Keep paragraphs short 
 +  * "Your subconscious mind does more writing than you think" 
 +  * Use verbs instead of concept nouns e.g. reaction, cynicism 
 +  * abolish "The human condition" 
 +  * avoid concept nouns 
 +    * "The common reaction is incredulous laughter" ... "most people just laugh with disbelief" 
 + 
 +Science 
 +  
 +  * Sequence is key - start with reader knows nothing --> "inverted pyramid" - Chimpanzee ticktactoe 
 +   
 +==== CH 17 Humor==== 
 + 
 +  * Humor - using it to deliver a serious point "Hairdresser" example 
 +  * "Humor is the secret weapon of the non-fiction writer. It is secret because so few writers realize that it is often their best tool -- and sometimes their only  tool -- for making an important point" p.134 
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 + 
 +==== History ==== 
 +  * 2017-04-26 Created 
 +  * 2020-08-28 Transcribed from index card to dokuwiki
  
 ====Source==== ====Source====
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